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Moon
06-30-2006, 05:35 AM
Dream

Seeing you smile trapped me in a dream.
Was it a dream?
A place I put myself to hide the truth.
It didn’t matter I was happy
And in that dream so were you.
One day you left.
Shattering that dream.
Shattering me.
It was nothing more
Than a ripple on a pond
You were growing farther and farther away.
While I was left on that bank wondering why.
I didn’t cry because my heart was doing it for me
But yet I didn’t hate you.
Hate…
Why hate someone I vowed to love.
My heart is sick with memories of you.
But yet I don’t cast them away.
I’ve realized this dream was a cage
And this feeling I had was nothing more than a collar.
Yes I knew…
But I didn’t want to.
I continued following these false feelings
And I didn’t care because I had you.
Tell me now that you’re gone
Did you love me?
Or was it just a dream for you to?
Its been years
And I’ve grown.
I created a new dream where I am happy.
A dream without you…

Montreal
06-30-2006, 05:41 AM
Thank you for writing a poem about me >3




j/k

quite lovely.

Moon
06-30-2006, 05:42 AM
Thank you for writing a poem about me >3




j/k

quite lovely.
Haha, You know i wuvs youz Dream-Chan. ^_^ <33333

Silver Winchester
06-30-2006, 10:45 PM
; ; that was so sad moonie and cute also I love it -scratches her behind her ears-

Moon
06-30-2006, 10:49 PM
Thank you Master. <33333 ^_^

Silver Winchester
06-30-2006, 11:01 PM
:D

anytime Moonie <333333333333

BlackRose25
06-30-2006, 11:35 PM
I liked it! ^^

Moon
07-01-2006, 01:58 AM
Hehe, Thank You. ^_^

Takeshi
07-01-2006, 01:13 PM
im not much of a poetry person, but it was pretty good.

frank
07-03-2006, 08:45 AM
Indeed! Capturing the essence of a dream is hard enough in prose, but to do it in free verse and to do it well, deserves our thanks. ^^