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Rain_Pixie
05-09-2006, 01:38 AM
I am but a lost soul
Wanting to be loved and
Not getting the same when I express
My true feelings for you
Seeing you at a distance, your
Arms out to catch and embrace me
The sound of your laugh and mine makes
My heart soar with happiness
I won't smile without you there
And when I share my sadness it comes out in
Her tears as she hugs and comforts me
My voice telling her it's alright, I'll see
You and be happy again
A forced smile, stoked sadness, I can't
Take these feelings anymore, I want to be near you, but
My mind screams at me that I'm being foolish and blinded by
Your presence...why does something so good...hurt me so bad...

Montreal
05-09-2006, 01:40 AM
-massive hug-


it is the exact emotion captured in one stanza.

frank
05-09-2006, 10:19 AM
It's good, Pixie. Very good. ^_^

Rain_Pixie
05-10-2006, 02:27 AM
* hugs Dream back *

I'm glad you both liked it ^_^

Rurouni Kenshin
06-01-2006, 04:16 PM
Great Poem Sis ^_^

Rain_Pixie
06-01-2006, 04:23 PM
thankies <3