a song from ma band, Dearth

[Smexi-Man]

here is a song i wrote for our band. hope ya like the lyrics:

"Subconsciously seduced by fate"

Speak the truth of one’s infernal mind
The illusions all in one
My soul is emptying, as a hit the ground
An eternal grave ahead, as I bleed forever

(Chorus)
I have lost the fight, and now I’m gone
A spot in hell, is wear I belong
So much pain, how are you wrong?
Don’t know why I started but now hope is gone

My thoughts are all reborn, now I know
The truth is in the end
The beast inside of me, is crawling out
Hell to all who appose, as I bleed forever

(Chorus)
I have lost the fight, and now I’m gone
A spot in hell, is wear I belong
So much pain, how are you wrong?
Don’t know why I started but now hope is gone

And you sit there, burning alive
Now you’re gone, burning alive

Why are you running to hide?
You’re inevitably going to die
Weeping alone, thoughts running through your head
Your soul is already dead
You will meet the king, in heavens house
But I suffer when no ones around

(Chorus)
I have lost the fight, and now I’m gone
A spot in hell, is wear I belong
So much pain, how are you wrong?
Don’t know why I started but now hope is gone

No more wasted lives, blood seeping pores, I’ll never find, the kingdom’s door

Now that I have seen my fate
The fiery depths open their gates
Now I know, what it feels inside
To burn eternally alive
Don’t make the same mistakes, I made
Walk through the heaven’s gate
The only thing left
Is to die off my own, regrets

(Chorus)
I have lost the fight, and now I’m gone
A spot in hell, is wear I belong
So much pain, how are you wrong?
Don’t know why I started but now hope is gone

I’ll never be alive…

[frank]

There ae some lyrics that are poetry unto themselves, there are others that need the support or partnership of a musical score.

For me, this is one of those. I read the intensity behind the writing, but the images don't come out to make me want to pay attention.

As a work of free verse, however, it is well-written. ^^