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Rhoey
08-23-2004, 08:21 PM
Tell me what you think....if they suck, or whatever. But remember, poems are something I do to express my feelings, and it's my way of distracting myself from reality.

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The dream of meant to be

In the night, I see you in my dreams
I hug you there, wish to give you a kiss
In my deepest wishes and imagination
I want to be with you so badly

I imagine myself with you
I can almost see your smile,
Almost feel the warmth of your embrace
I could give my all to be with you
If only for a day!

I picture us together
I pray at night
That it will be you and me
You by my side
In my wishes and dreams
That’s the way it’s meant to be.

*******

You pay the price

Through our time on earth
Through the days of our lives
About us, there are rumours heard
About us, they were telling lies.

Sugar-coated and false
Being like that to the one
who loves you
To the person who cared about you
You’re being cold, you’re being cruel
Thinking, by this among your pals,
They would think you’re cool.

Going behind your friends’ backs
Accusing them falsely
Saying only other people make you happy
While you yourself,
laugh inside at the irony.

Not really knowing what
you want from life
Being confused, you tell people lies
Having lost confidence,
having lost your pride
You try to seek a shelter
Thus, you try to hide.

Laughing falsely,
pretending you’re so nice
You think everyone wants to
Be with you
While they see through you,
They see the faking in your eyes.

Oh, but one day
Life will make you pay
The price you have to pay
For all those years you faked away.
Believe me,
that day, will be a slap in your face!

When you trampled on and
broke peoples’ hearts into
Especially those who loved you
You’ll know that what you did, you’ll regret
Because even if people forgive,
Life will never forget.

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I'll return later with more, but I gotta go now.

Tell me what you think of these so far. ;)

Laterz,
Rhoeykins.

Sei Akujin
08-24-2004, 02:09 AM
Wonderful! ;) I hope you post more!

White Mage
08-24-2004, 11:14 AM
I have to agree! Those were nice!

Rhoey
08-24-2004, 03:32 PM
Heh, the first one was written because of the guy I'm in love with, and the other one was written for my ex best friend, the person who enjoyed to trample on me, the person who loved her the most.

Anyway, I wrote a few because of her, for her, and here's another one for her, that made me become semifinalist in the International Open Poetry Contest, and also, The International Library of Poetry will publish my poem in a poetry collection book, which is told to be the collection of writings by "Today's most talented poets and songwriters".

You can imagine how pleased and how wondeful it made me feel. :)

Here's that poem that will be published;

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I’ve hurt you, now I’ve lost you

Because of you a sunny day changes nothing for me
For each day that passes I just wish for everyone to
leave me be

The guilt that I feel because of you, cannot be put into words easy enough to say
Although I wish I could make it up to you
You just push me away.

I don't know what to say...
You left me stunned
You left me there dumbfounded

You could have told me before
Instead of letting this torture you even more.

Everyone has their problems and sorrows in life
It's not about having more or less,
it's all about strife;
Learning to handle it and take care of it
Problems don't just get absorbed
Someone once told me 'Problems are meant to be solved'.

You can't seem to understand
I can't see what's inside of your head

You should learn to talk, just speak a little bit more
Before you end up making both you and me sore.

******

And this one, written 5 am on the ferry;

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Waiting

My whole life is all one big waiting
Waiting for joy, for happiness to come
Trying to do something for it
But not being able to succeed

It’s all an eternal waiting
Feels like forever
I’m wasting precious time,
Precious minutes of my life!

For a ferry over the sea
For a bustrip over the land
For this, for that
My time runs, my life rushes past me
And I hardly had any time to make you happy

It’s like seeing the country sweep by you
When you’re going highspeed on the highway

When you know you’ve found whatever happiness
You were looking for, and wasted all your life to find it
You have to be afraid to have to lose it!

******

As you can see, poetry is my life. ^^;;
And I'm not ashamed. It puts me through the day and distracts me from the troubles in my life.

webmistress4571
08-24-2004, 05:08 PM
love'em!!! keep posting

ephraim
08-24-2004, 11:42 PM
i realy like the second one so keep the madness coming

Sei Akujin
08-25-2004, 03:28 AM
Very nice!

webmistress4571
08-25-2004, 03:43 AM
good calls

ephraim
09-11-2004, 11:21 PM
deep