Children of Reality

[Jericho]

This one I posted in a contest on another forum (http://www.moonfantasy.com/phpBB).



Open hand reaches out
Grasping onto dreams
Of what they once knew

See them now
So far away
All they have left to be

Is what you want
That's what they are
Tell me, now can you see?

How do you know
This is what they want,
When all they want is you?

All they can do,
Is all they can do
See them for what they are

Lost children of the Nether lands
Looking for reality

[Montreal]

i'm the lost child of my mother's nether lands.

very good. the stanzas are short, which i like. : D

[Jericho]

lol Okay, get your mind out of the gutter. >< You're the reason I'm such a pervert.

[frank]

Disturbing and dark. But filled with impact of suggestions, and to some extent, even pre-knowledge.

Is sad.

[Jericho]

Thanks for the comment...

I didn't realize it at the time I wrote it, but I think it has a lot to do with the world today...

The way children are being tossed aside like the world's left-overs. Mother's abandoning their children, abortions... all that. Really is kind of depressing.