Forever and always

[Zelda]

.....This is my first poem I've written...since 8th grade....so yeah @.@ not that good LoL

I watch you go, your back to me.
I beg for no, do not leave.
Tears, one by one, drip from me,
Please do not turn your back and leave.

You try to hide your soul inside,
Yet you prove that you do yet cry.
The key to your soul, locked inside,
Is in these tears I tend to cry.

You said you loved me when you left,
But if that is so promise me this:
You are my love, and I am yours.
Forever and always, we will be no more.

Now you return, in my arms at last.
I will never let you go, not to that deep dark past.
Afghanistan war was so meaningless.
It only brought upon pain endless.

Now that you are here, my baby dear,
Our promise forever echos in our ears.
You are my love, and I am yours.
Forever and always, we will be no more.

[frank]

Congratulations on a fine piece of writing. Since the 8th Grade may or may not be important. The work which you just shared with us is.

As I read, I was caught by the emotion of love and then with one word, the love stayed, but became even more intense, and at the same time allowed a poitical statement to be made.

Again, congratulations and thank you!

[Mana]

not that good? i love it! it made me cry! #wipes her eyes again#

[Zelda]

*blushes a lot*

Well...it's...kinda a true story....

My boyfriend/fiancee is in the army infantry...I've cried hysterically and still do b/c he'll be gone a year. That truly is our promise: Always and forever. He's tried so hard not to cry when he would see me cry but I knew he wanted to.

He's being sent to Afghanistan and I'm afraid of what it will do to him...

I thought it might kinda ruin the poem if I explained it though iono...but it really does mean a lot to me.

Thank you so much *blushes again*

[Erk Mizuhara]

wow. that poem was fantastic. I could almost feel your emotions screaming at me.

I really hope it all turns out okay. I'm sure it will. I'm here for you, if you need to talk.

[Zelda]

wow. that poem was fantastic. I could almost feel your emotions screaming at me.

I really hope it all turns out okay. I'm sure it will. I'm here for you, if you need to talk.

*^_^* you're too kind. *bows* thanks so much ^_^