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Forgotten-Nobody
02-19-2006, 12:01 AM
I've been dreaming...
About a time and place.
There's nothing there...
But the shadows of a face.

I can't see you...
Can you tell me how?
I've been searching...
Yet I come up with absolutely nothing.

How can I find you?
If you hide yourself from me...
How can I find you?
I'm trying help can't you see...
How can I find you?
If you're trying to be...
If you're trying to be invisible...
Why do you try to be invisible?

frank
02-25-2006, 08:17 AM
This can tear at one's heart Lady L. A Universal glimpse of the pain of parting?

It is well done, and very moving. I had to read it several times before a clear image emerged. Even then, it wasn't all that clear, which is usually the way frustration operates.

Thank you for sharing this with us.