My Answer

[Kawaii Shuichi]

*tears building up in my eyes*

all i can say is i'm sorry.
but nothing is going to change.
everything is in derrange.
i'm not going to run after you
or tell you that my love is true.
i'm not going to wipe away your tears.
or chase away all your fears.
i'm sorry it has to end this way.
i'm sorry this is our last day.
i'm sorry that i lied to you.
i'm sorry but the truth is due.
i never wanted this to occur.
everything is in a blur.
i do care but it's not love.
it's time to let go of the dove.

[Takai]

AWWWW that is sooo sad! *cries* it's beautiful

[Kawaii Shuichi]

I wrote it under a minute.....
and it tore me apart every second and afterwards.

[Eien]

^^...na~` it is good..just be so downhearted

*cheers Shuichi up*

[Kawaii Shuichi]

Hmm... thanks Eien chan....everything is good now.

'We' worked it out. (me and the person I wrote this poem to)

[Takai]

I'm glad.

[Watari]

aww!! *wipes away tears* that was so sweet..*tears building up again* beautiful.....

[No one]

*tears building up in my eyes*

...
everything is in a blur.
...

Maybe that's because your crying? I dun know, just sayin.
Anyway, yeah that was really good. Your great at free verse.

[Kid]

I love it *crys*
~*Kid*~

[Erk Mizuhara]

unfortunately i appear to have lost the ability to cry, therefore this poem does not affect me as it does the rest of you.

but it's still good.

[Feral]

*tears building up in my eyes*

all i can say is i'm sorry.
but nothing is going to change.
everything is in derrange.
i'm not going to run after you
or tell you that my love is true.
i'm not going to wipe away your tears.
or chase away all your fears.
i'm sorry it has to end this way.
i'm sorry this is our last day.
i'm sorry that i lied to you.
i'm sorry but the truth is due.
i never wanted this to occur.
everything is in a blur.
i do care but it's not love.
it's time to let go of the dove.

That is very touching. :(

--Lain--