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frank
12-07-2005, 04:00 AM
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Jericho
12-15-2005, 11:19 PM
The emotion I sensed when reading this was frustration.
Well, written poem. I liked it a lot.

frank
12-21-2005, 06:09 AM
Glomper, I am afraid that you know me all too well. Which is not a bad thing, of course. Not a bad thing at all. But it does remind me that even I, when viewed by the right person, am transparent.

Thank you for liking my work and for saying so. That is meaningful as well as inspirational.

Motoko
01-07-2006, 06:50 AM
Well done frank, well done.....

frank
01-13-2006, 08:25 AM
Thank you Motoko, but I am afraid that you always did have a favorable bias to my work.

Not that that is a complaint. Hardly. Every Wodsmith should have a supporter such as you. ^_^

Lady Vamp
01-13-2006, 07:10 PM
Wow. Took me a couple reads to understand. Very very insightful to your frustration. I liked it!

frank
01-14-2006, 05:58 AM
Thank you Akihana. I would share the motivation, if not the inspiration, for this piece, but as 'twas meant to be somewhat of a satire, 'tis best left as is.

That you would trouble yourself to give it a few reads, however, is appreciated along with favorable praise, of course.

Lady Vamp
01-17-2006, 07:14 PM
No problem! I love reading good poetry unlike the mediocre poems they give you in class. I hate how too many people are unappreciative of good poetry. Some people just can't find the true meanings of some things...

Anyway, good poem! Bring us more!