My hideout

[Watari]

The silence is so soothing
The twilight, for me will bend
The absense of a before
...loyal to the end.

The air is closing in now
My breath, slowing fast
My eyes are slowly closing
Into visions that have no past.

The darkness now consumes me
Still beside my wake
As I pray to silent shadows
Whilst their form I take.

Now, I may whisper to the willows
And I can sing amongst the plains
And call upon the horizon
As I dance to the beat of the rains.

Fallen angels guide me
To a place of eternal song
As a chorus sung by deities
Resound as I stroll along.

The herons dance belows lilly pads
The sky seems an ocean of blue
And the wind told tales of lovers
That were heard by few.

Then above there came dull thunder
As I lay still in the ancient stream
Crying softly as reality crept closer
And I left behind my dream.



..comments appreciated..

[Takai]

it's beautiful.. very sad

[Watari]

thanks..glad you like it..

[Takai]

i like all your poems anyway.. wish i could write something that makes sense..

[Watari]

^.^..you're just putting yourself down Takai..I'm sure you can write a good poem if you try..you need good inspiration..I base my poems on my *ahem* sucky life..and it WORKS!! Ta-da

[Kawaii Shuichi]

*starts to cry*
i really really like this!

umm...i have a project for creative writing class where we have to bring in a poem from a poetic we really really like
i was wondering if it was okay if i brought this poem in?
....if you could pm me your real name that could be great...
or i could just use your screen name and say it's your writer's penname....

what ever you would pefer....
if it's okay that i use it.

*still crying*
it's so sad!

[Watari]

*gasp* that would be such an honor..I however, do not want to reveal my real name Kawaii Shuichi..so just have Watari as my pen name okay?..of course you can bring it in! I'm so elated now! you made my day Kawaii Shuchi! yay *dances*

[Takai]

See, Watari-san? Your poems rule ^.^ Huh, I guess my life isn't crappy enough.. should i be happy about it? x.x

[Kawaii Shuichi]

Arigatou gozaimasu Watari san.
Thank you very much Watari san.

[Watari]

no problem ^.^

[Kawaii Shuichi]

After I read your poem aloud today in Creative Writing class there was a great applause and people were asking me where they could find more poems by you...including the teacher. ^^

[Takai]

yay, go Watari~

[Watari]

oh my goodness..I feel so loved!! ^.^ I will post another poem..as soon as I can come up with a decent one! ^.^..I've been writing really bad ones lately..anyway..thanx for reading my poem to everyone in your class Kawaii Shuichi!!

[jeff]

Hey nice poem!!! I'll see if i can work on one and post it in soon!!!

[Kawaii Shuichi]

It's really no problem Watari san.
Your poem in really beautiful and full of emotions.
I was honored to read it aloud.