:~Frozen shards~:

[Enchantress]

Heh my first work on this site, comments appreciated

~Frozen Shards~
Shattered shards subdue this soul
forsaken sight lost within the pain
brake my skin to keep control
desolate my chance to gain

Reaching out and caving in
Hide the need for embrace
Take my hand let's begin
this heart is in disgrace

Too tainted to feel touch
too dead to even breathe
yet you force life too much
I can't ignore or decieve

Don't kiss my broken lips
my heart will shred your all
your injured, your blood drips
Yet refuse your emotions recall

Don't you see me as a threat?
someone too broken for your care
I want you so, please don't regret
I want you to always be there


~Enchantress~

[MajinYajuu]

Nice work by the way


I know I should be the last person to say anything about sad or dark poems but what is it everyone seems to be churning them out lately.

[Enchantress]

indeed but mine usually always have light, hope, try to explain that depression and intensity of it isn't all there is to life, you yourself must decide upon your destiny ect ect

[MajinYajuu]

Well if you want to see some of the darker ones look at mine & Saint Evils

[Dark Shadow]

.... this one is very good, i also have some.. or used to have....

i'll check if the ones i wrote are here...

[Watari]

it was quite good..I think I should post my poems..but I am afraid of flames..*hides under the bed*..*muffled* Nice Job..