Emotions (cant think of title)

[Jou-chan]

They're nothing but jokes
But they're tearing me apart
I'm losing my emotions
It's killing my heart

The tears start coming
For no reason at all
I sit there quietly
As they fall

I hate these tears
I'll make them go away
By causing myself pain
It'll keep them at bay

My nails dig into flesh
As the tears slowly calm
I pull my nails out
To see blood dripping down my palm

The tears are gone
But the pain is still there
I dont think people notice
Or maybe they dont care

Even though it cause's blood
It will soon stop
Only way to keep from crying
Is to keep my mask on top

Tears are a weakness
So I have to keep them away
The jokes will then disappear
But my heart forever aches where the pain will lay

NO i dont cut myself and I'm tired of everybody i let read it ask if i do.

[kenshin25]

Things that we cannot control. We desire so much to, but in the end we have no power whatsoever to control that. These are Real Emotions. We cannot doubt what we feel inside our heart. You sit, and wonder why these emotions are consuming you. Why these emotions are tearing you up. These are Real Emotions. I look up at the sky and tears build up behind my eyes. You are destroying me, day by day...you are ripping my heart to pieces...What I feel I can't explain. The funny thing is, I still don't know your name. These are real emotions.

That was a pretty good poem. That's a good title too, emotions or you could use the one I have (Real Emotions). Well anyways, I hope I hear more from you in the future. ^_^

[Jou-chan]

I've lately giving up writing poetry. If it comes to me I might write more. That poem took me 2 mins to write...

[Kawaii Shuichi]

This poem is really....well, I can relate to it...alot....
It's really deep and brings back emotions I locked up inside myself a long time ago. It's really good.

My poetry writing is the same way.
When I write, it takes me very little time because it comes straight from the heart...
That's why I hate it when your teacher tells you to write a poem on a given subject and gives you gives you 10 min....and you have no idea what to write cuz you don't care about it.

I give you 10 stars my dear.
And no, I'm not going to ask if you cut because I get the same treatment when it comes to my poems.

I believe, what is said in the poem is what you feel...not necessarily what you do....

I can't wait to read more of your work but I will be patient.

[KyoKo]

...

[Jou-chan]

What?

[KyoKo]

what part of ... do you not understand

[Jou-chan]

Well I'm stupid so I dont even understand the word.. I'm not home so there haha dont ask.

[KyoKo]

well i dont understand why people
that i have been friends with leave
me out of the loop whisper so i dont
hear them and hide things when im
around oh well i guess i was not ment
to have friends for a long time i never
was and never will be

[Jou-chan]

Guess what I started to write poetry again but nothing thats good enough to go on ACF so yeah...at least my brains sort of working.

[Kid]

Sora It sounds like your friens are mean
i hope they start to talk to you
and start to add you into things
well bye
Kid

[Jou-chan]

Yep I'm an all around B**ch thanks for rubbing it in LOL

[Kid]

wow thats great to know...
Sora If they dont start adding you in soon just stop talking to them that always works

[Jou-chan]

Actually that doesn't always work...But thats none of my business.

[Kid]

well it might not but they will stop
talking to you and sora seems like
a person with alot of friends it not
like she could talk to her other friends
~*Kid*~

[KyoKo]

lol i guess i have alot of friend
so ya maybe i will do as you say
well bye Kid

[Jou-chan]

Yes but you dont know whats really going on so it not like you can judge if her friends are mean or not.

[Kawaii Shuichi]

THIS NEEDS TO STOP NOW!

This is the poetry thread about Jou chan's poem....

Not about...what ever you are talking about.

Stop the spamming now or I will lock this thread.

This is your first and only warning.

[Jou-chan]

sorry...but in a way thank you for telling them this. It was getting old and annoying!

[Kawaii Shuichi]

It's no problem.
Now let's talk about the poem ne?

Just to let you know, I printed it out and put it in my binder (with your name on it..well...your screen name)

I hope you don't mind...If you do, i'll take it out.

[Jou-chan]

No thats ok...wow thats new.I didn't think anyone really liked it....Oh well...I think I'll continue to write poetry for awhile I gave up.

[Kawaii Shuichi]

you really should continue.
your very talented.
you write alot like i did....
er...yeah...my poems have been lacking alot lately though...

*sighs*

you really are talented. keep up the good work.
i hope to see more from you soon.

[Kid]

Jou-Chan im sorry if i mad you mad
but you poem is really good
i would print it out too but my printer does not work
~*Kid*~

[Jou-chan]

NO NO NO you didn't make me mad...its ok its just I go to school with sora so I know whats going on but anyways...thank you everybody I'll try to write more but I only write good poems every once in a while..I'll have to dig out my poetry book...
your printer doesnt work either..lol my hates me it wont work...Oh well.

[Watari]

that was a really beautiful poem Jou-chan..and no, I'm not going to ask you if you cut, because, to tell the truth, I don't want to know...I've had enough experience with it

Don't feel bad Kawaii Shuichi! I've gone a month straight now without coming up with a good poem -_-..sadness

[Blades Of Nightmare]

your songs are so touching