Lonely Inside

[Sei Akujin]

A poem I came up with..................but it sounds crappy, but so what? I tried...........

Lonely inside,
Empty inside,
My soul is gone,
Soon my heart will too.

Lonely inside,
I lost all the warmth of love,
I have lost everything,
I am an empty shell,
with nothing inside,
Lonely inside.

[Takai]

that's very beautiful.. no offense (i don't know whether or not it will offend you) but it somehow reminds me of Sephiroth o.O and the lyrics of One Winged Angel.. but that's me.. but the poem is really nice

[Sei Akujin]

I am not offended..............I didn't know that song had lyrics............ -_-; and I have it downloaded on my computer..............all I hear is Seph-I-Roth then the instrumantal part.............no lyrics............

[Takai]

Estuans interius
ira vehementi
Sephiroth

Sors imanis
et innanis

veni veni venius
ne me mori facius

^lyrics ^___^ most of it is repeated two-four times. You probably have the instrumental version with no vocal. Anyways if translated it goes something like this: "Burning inside with violent anger.. Sephiroth.. Fate monstrous and empty.. Sephiroth.. Come come oh come, do not let me die, noble.. Come come oh come, do not let me die, glorious.. Sephiroth.." So your poem kind of reminded me of that, dunno why -.-

[Sei Akujin]

Oh yeah.............those lyrics..................I haven't listen to that song in about 6 months..............

[Takai]

so the one you have on your pc /does/ have lyrics after all ^_^

[Sei Akujin]

Yep.............

[Kawaii Shuichi]

:( WAH! I'M GOING TO CRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! very good though and yeah... i really like it....

*CRIES*