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Kawaii Shuichi
10-04-2004, 11:42 PM
I'm hidden.
Put away.
My eyes
are closed.
I'm in
the dark.

Your love
pierces.
My mind
explodes.
My chest
tightens.

I can't breath.

Blood,
always being shed.
Tears,
never to be seen.
Screams,
filling my heart.

I've gone blind.

Addiction
to the pain.
My skin
tears.
My body,
in a flame.

I'm on my knees.

Your gaze.
My longing.
The silence.
How long...
Will this last?

I won't summit.

Love
lasts in me
Forever.

Leaving
is not an option.

I won't summit.

Devotion
is my promise
to you.

BlackShadow
10-04-2004, 11:43 PM
i like this one. It has so much emotion in it. hmmm you are worthy.

Kawaii Shuichi
10-04-2004, 11:45 PM
thanks. i'm never good at judging myself.

BlackShadow
10-04-2004, 11:47 PM
i totally agree. It shows you and i not conceded. (I say this in a respectful way.)

Kawaii Shuichi
10-04-2004, 11:50 PM
^^